LO1- Storyboards

LO2- Release and Consent Forms

LO4 Offline Edit

LO1-Script

Narrator/ Presenter-

"Why is mental health so hard to tak about?"

"This is a question many of us should be asking ourselves, in the day and age of Facebook and Smart phones where everyone can talk to almost anyone at any given time you'd think it'd be easy"

"Nearly three in four young people fear the reactions of friends when they talk about their mental health problems"

However in reality, 9 out of 10 people who come from forward about their menal health issues recieve no discrimination or stigmatization whatsoever"

"So it seems the popular idea of mental health being a taboo or avoided subject by young people is an out-dated and incorrect belief"

"This is making it hard for young people that have mental health issues to feel comfortable to find help, this is a big problem when around 670,000 young people suffer with mental health problems in the UK alone"

"When we asked a few young people what puts them off speaking about mental health they replied with..."

Voice Actor/ Adult-
"Stigmatization"
"Thinking they're attention seeking from other peoples point of view"

Narrator/ Presenter-
"Whats not surprising is how young people reacted to the same question..."

"The young people we asked all had a generalised idea, mental health is a taboo subject that people find hard to speak about"

“Many also said that other young people didn’t feel confident enough to speak about their problems or that they many young people don’t actually know the severity of mental health problems and so don’t really understand their situation fully and so they find it difficult to get help.”

“ This is why with mental health it is so vital to find help and talk about your problems before they become a weight on your daily life.”

“But this doesnt mean tell everyone everything about your personal problems”

“The real point of this video is to highlight the idea that finding the correct help from people you are close to or websites and groups like flourish is a positive thing to do to help you cope with such issues , dont be defined by your mental health issues.”

LO4 Drafts of Documentary

This peice of footage is the first part that we edited as this is out timelapse footage and we didnt need to do much to it. We sped the footage up and also cut bits out. We have edited out the sound and will add a voiceover.

Feed back from Sheffield Flourish

Brandon from Sheffield Flourish gave us some excellent feedback and liked our ideas.

LO3 Evidence of Filming

This is the ampitheatre behind the train station. We filmed here for our opening shot so and it is a distinguishing shot of Sheffield.

This is the tram stop behind the train station, we filmed here because it is a key feature of sheffield.

 This is a bridge crossing over the Sheffield train lines, we filmed here because it looks gritty and has a certain feeling to it and fits the general coventions of the documentary style.

This is Parkhill Flats and we filmed here because it is also a key location in sheffield and it has a bus stop which is what we needed for this part of the storyboard.

LO3 Rushes

The footage here can be improved and the first few clips need to be refilmed as they have been filmed in the wrong settings.

There is however, some really good footage that just needs to be steadied so that its not as shaky.

LO4- Drafts

Draft One 

The footage that has been edited here could be better once we have removed the audio as it isn't meant to be there and it will also be better when we have finished editing. When this part is finished there will be a voice over and maybe also some words appearing over the footage.

LO1- Shot List

Shot List-

1-       Sheffield City Skyline. Panning to the right (amphitheatre)

2-      Shudehill Panning Left Following Tram down into tunnel where we view presenter

3-      In the tunnel head on static shot of presenter (2 cameras) side on camera view of presenter

4-      Presenter Walking down the steps at Pond Hill- Low angle shot

5-      Static shot of a train rolling in high angle

6-      Close up side shot of a train rolling in

7-      Cut to tunnel near train station with an over shoulder shot of a girl

8-      Shot of a guy’s hands holding a cup of coffee

9-      Static shot at peace gardens of a wall and people walking past

10-      Presenter at the Crucible- outside the Winter Gardens (2 cameras) low angle shot and high angle shot

New Scene/ Topic Matter

11-   Shot of student waking up-

12-shallow depth of field of alarm clock

13-   Shot of student leaving his room (high contrast lighting)

14-   Tracking shot of student in the kitchen

15-   Close up of students hands locking up his house

16-   Shot of student waiting for the bus (wide shot)

17-   Medium shot of student getting on the bus

18-   Medium shot of student getting of the bus

19-   sydney street over shoulder shot of student walking

20-   over shoulder shot of student entering UTC

21-   Fade to black

22-   Shudehill Tunnel presenter stood talking- medium close up

24-   presenter walking up the ramp near shudehill taking tracking left

25-   Amphitheatre presenter talking static shot   

LO1- Gantt Chart

LO2- locations